You bought a ticket for a music concert. You’re unable to attend the concert. You want to offer the ticket to your friend. Write a letter to give him the ticket. In your letter, Give detailed information about the concert Explain why you’re unable to attend the concert Tell him how to get the ticket

Dear Smith, Hope you are doing awesome and everything is sunshine and rainbows on your side! I wanted to inform you that I am not going to attend Satinder Sartaj's music concert which is going to be held next week. As I told you earlier, I am a very big fan of famous music star Satinder Sartaj. I always wanted to attend his music show when I was back home but haven't got any chance.

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Toronto for

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. I was over the moon and I brought two

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as soon as slots were open. Unfortunately, I didn't know that I have final exams coming up in May. I would like to offer the

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to you because I remember you

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mentioned that you would like to see him performing live in future.

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concert is going to be held in Toronto in the Scotia area stadium. Which is very close to your house

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it is on the weekend. I have booked upfront

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view.I know that you have off from work on Saturday. So, don't miss

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chance. Please let me know if you want to join the join and I will send

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to your Email after I get a reply back. I look forward to your prompt reply. Best regards, Saijbir

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kaursaijbirMon May 12 2025

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Try to include more detailed information about the concert, such as the date and time of the event, to enhance clarity.

coherence and cohesion

Ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single idea for better clarity and structure. For example, consider separating the details of the concert from the reason for your absence.

suitable writing tone

The letter has a warm and friendly tone, making it personal and engaging.

complete response

You effectively express your enthusiasm for the concert and your understanding of your friend's interests.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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232 words

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