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Some feel that school uniforms make schools safer for students, create a "level playing field" that reduces socioeconomic disparities and encourage children to focus on their studies rather than their clothes. Others say school uniforms infringe upon students' right to express their individuality, have no positive effect on behavior and academic achievement. Discuss both sides & give your opinion.

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In every country, on the
earth
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 there is disagreement around the topic of school
dresscode
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dress code
. On
this
 topic, few consider that
uniform
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uniforms
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 ought to
mandatory
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be mandatory
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 in
schools
 and it aid
to maintain
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in maintaining
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 social balance and
children
 will
play
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pay
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 more attention to their education rather than dresses;
while
 some contend that having set dresses
do
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does
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 not make any difference in studies. In
this
 essay, I will
explaning
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explain
explaining
 both
perspective
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perspectives
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 and
providing
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 my opinion.
To begin
 with, there is no doubt having
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a specfic
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specfic dresscode
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specific dress code
 in
schools
 brings substantial benefits. First and foremost,
uniform
 assists
to maintain
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in maintaining
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a
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apply
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social
eqaulity
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equality
 in
schools
. To
exaplain
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explain
this
, some kids belong to poor families and their parents can not afford expensive
dress
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dresses
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. In
this
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these
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 cases, some impoverished students
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are bulled
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bulled
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bullied
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 by wealthy students or they force their parents to buy branded clothes under peer pressure.
Additionally
, uniforms represent the school sign.
For example
, if
children
 get lost
in
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during
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 school time;
thus
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the
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uniform
 helps
police
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the police
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 to find
children
. A
recenr
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recent
 survey conducted by
Time
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Times
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New
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News
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 of India indicates that in 2002 Indian police solved 10 cases of child kidnap with the help of
uniform
 identity.
On the other hand
, if
schools
 have no set dress code
children
 can wear
any thing
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anything
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. It gives them more freedom and
independant
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independence
independent
.
Likewise
,
children
 get
bore
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bored
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wearning
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wearing
warning
 one
uniform
everyday
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every day
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. Having no
uniform
sometime
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sometimes
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 overwhelmed them and they come with happy faces;
therefore
 it positive attitude
help
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helps
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 them to get higher scores in education.
For instance
, an article written by The University of New York illustrates that 50% of nations in
world
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the world
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 have no set dress in
schools
. In a nutshell, in my point of view
uniform
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uniforms
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is
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are
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 paramount in
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the schools
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schools
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school
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 system which brings equality;
whereas
 normal cannot substitute them.
However
, having one casual day
in
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a week is a
prominant
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prominent
 idea.
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The essay covers both perspectives on school uniforms, satisfying the requirement to discuss both sides of the issue effectively.
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