The table below shows the projected costing over the next five years in american dollar for three environmental projects for sustainable foresty. the pie chart shows the expected expenditure brealdown allocation for the year as the projects are set up.

The table below shows the projected costing over the next five years in american dollar for three environmental projects for sustainable foresty. the pie chart shows the expected expenditure brealdown allocation for the year as the projects are set up.
The chart gives information about
amount
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of average rainfall in Australia by month for
last
year
. The line graph illustrates the mean precipitation for Australia each month for the
last
4 decades.
Overall
, the amount of precipitation stayed relatively stable in the
last
year
in contrast
with
last
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40 years. It rained more in the end of winter and in the beginning of spring than in other periods of the
year
.
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forty years
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September to January proportion of rainfall increased dramatically from about 10 mm to just under 80 mm. In the
last
forty years first three months of the
year
was nearly 70
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average, but it dropped to around 65
last
year
. In the spring amount of precipitation started to fall steadily and reached its lowest point in August with around 5 mm
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