The table below shows the projected costing over the next five years in american dollar for three environmental projects for sustainable foresty. the pie chart shows the expected expenditure brealdown allocation for the year as the projects are set up.

The table below shows the projected costing over the next five years in american dollar for three environmental projects for sustainable foresty. the pie chart shows the expected expenditure brealdown allocation for the year as the projects are set up.
The provided table gives information about the projected
costings
in American dollars for three environmental projects for sustainable forestry over the next five years. The expected expenditure breakdown allocation for the first
year
is provided by the pie chart.
Overall
, it is obviously seen that during the five years the highest
costings
area is south-east Asia,
whereas
West Africa is the lowest
costings
area. Getting back to the details the lowest
costings
area
has
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west Africa. The figures
decreases
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gradually. The first
year
it
accounts
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10.5
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million
, the
last
year
the figure
makes
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up 3.5
million
,
whereas
south-east
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Asia has spent the highest
costings
between 30
million
and 50
million
.
However
,
the
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analysed period
central
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America constitutes only 47
million
collectively. As can be seen from the pie chart in
year
1 set-up costs are rated about half of the all.
Also
, the percentage of the office expenses and the training is projected to the almost equal members. And the people will receive only 30 per cent
to
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their salaries.
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