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The table below shows the projected costing over the next five years in american dollar for three environmental projects for sustainable foresty. the pie chart shows the expected expenditure brealdown allocation for the year as the projects are set up.

The table below shows the projected costing over the next five years in american dollar for three environmental projects for sustainable foresty. the pie chart shows the expected expenditure brealdown allocation for the year as the projects are set up.
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The table illustrates the projected
price
 for three continents for sustainable forestry over the next 5 years.
Overall
, west Africa's and
central
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Central
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 America's
price
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prices
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 will decrease dramatically,
while
price
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the price
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 for sustainable forestry in south-east Asia
are
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is
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 going to increase.
Additionally
, half of the expenditure will
spend
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be spent
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 on salaries in the first
year
. By period, west Africa's costings will have decreased from the first to the fifth
year
, 10.5
millions
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million
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 and 3.5
american
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American
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 dollars respectively. The
price
 for forestry in Central America will decrease 5 times, from 20
millions
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million
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 in the 1
year
and
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apply
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to the 5
millions
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million
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 in the fifth
year
.
Nevertheless
, in
south-east
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Southeast
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 Asia expenses will decrease, from 30
millions
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million
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 to
the
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apply
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50
millions
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million
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. In the first
year
, for salaries will spend 50% of all costings. For office expenses will spend as
many
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much
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 money as
for
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on
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trainings
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training
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. One in
third
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a third
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 of all
financie
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finance
financial
 will take set-up costs.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words price, year, millions with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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