A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He / she has asked you for advice about living in your city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter suggest an interesting part of the city to live in * describe the public transport in your city say how your friend can meet new people there
Dear Emma,
I’m writing to help with your accommodation. I know it has been difficult for you to move
in
another country, so here I am!
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Firstly
, let’s start with the living options. Despite all the noise and pollution, I believe the centre of the city would be a great idea. It’s the most crowded one though,
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ground houses for a reasonable price. Moreover
, the majority of them include a playground, so your little one would be enchanted.
Secondly
,the public transport cost is 6 lei and there are plenty of options, so you don’t have to worry even if you get lost, because there are maps at the stations with their itinerary. Additionally
, for a quick arrival
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arrival,
taxi
.
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Lastly
, you can meet fun-loving, interesting people at the theatre, malls or sports clubs. For example
, events like retro car exhibition
give the opportunity to new connections.
All the best,
NicoletaFix the agreement mistake
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Consider elaborating more on the advantages of the city center to provide a clearer picture.
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Ensure some sentences are connected with transition words to improve flow.
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Your letter has a friendly and personal tone, suitable for writing to a friend.
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Each paragraph focuses on a single idea, making the letter easy to follow.
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You have included a clear greeting and closing in your letter.