A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He / she has asked you for advice about living in your city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter suggest an interesting part of the city to live in * describe the public transport in your city say how your friend can meet new people there

Dear Emma, I’m writing to help with your accommodation. I know it has been difficult for you to move
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another country, so here I am!
Firstly
, let’s start with the living options. Despite all the noise and pollution, I believe the centre of the city would be a great idea. It’s the most crowded one though
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but has a variety of flats and
also
ground houses for a reasonable price.
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, the majority of them include a playground, so your little one would be enchanted.
Secondly
,the public transport cost is 6 lei and there are plenty of options, so you don’t have to worry even if you get lost, because there are maps at the stations with their itinerary.
Additionally
, for a quick
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you could opt for
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.
Lastly
, you can meet fun-loving, interesting people at the theatre, malls or sports clubs.
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, events like retro car
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give the opportunity to new connections. All the best, Nicoleta
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Consider elaborating more on the advantages of the city center to provide a clearer picture.
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Ensure some sentences are connected with transition words to improve flow.
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Your letter has a friendly and personal tone, suitable for writing to a friend.
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Each paragraph focuses on a single idea, making the letter easy to follow.
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You have included a clear greeting and closing in your letter.
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