The graph below shows the percentages of households with different kinds of technology in the U.S. from 1995 to 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The line charts provide key information about the present proportion of different types of technology in
United
Correct article usage
the United
states
between 1995 and 1999. The units are measured in percentages. Capitalize word
States
Overall
, it is clear from the graph that most of the technology increased in the year 1999. In addition
, washing machines were at peak
from 1995 to 1999, Correct pronoun usage
their peak
whereas
the internet was the lower
thing in 1995 but it was lower than the DVD player in 1999.
Correct word choice
lowest
According to
what is shown, in 1996 most of the households were the same proportion except crumpets and washing machines. At the end
of year, 1998 phones and computers were both about 68%.
In terms of computers increased by about 5% each year but, the DVD player was
declined by almost 15% from 1995 to 1996.Unnecessary verb
apply
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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