The map describes changes to a city since 1950.
The given maps compare
one
city in 1950 and now.
Overall
, over the
time the Correct article usage
apply
number of
population has seen dramatic growth from 20,000 to 200,000.
The greatest change until now was the increase of residential areas . In 1950 Correct quantifier usage
apply
this
area consisted only
a few parts of the city, Change preposition
of only
however
it probably extended Add a comma
however,
for
five times. Change preposition
apply
Furthermore
, the airport station was enlarged for several flights. Major roads were built all over the city. In 1950 there was only one
unique bridge and now an extra bridge was added due to
new
residential area.
Correct article usage
the new
In addition
, one
huge lake has appeared and to block the way of a flood of
Change preposition
apply
it
, Correct pronoun usage
apply
one
dam built. Near the center
of the map, there was a government building which was the only Change the spelling
centre
one
. After some years this
building was made smaller and the second one
was constructed in large size. Moreover
a long river which flooded from the west to south-east, divided into two small ones.Add a comma
Moreover,
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