The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.
The pipe charts compare the variety age of
population
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populations
include
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including
Yemen
and Italy commencing from 2000 to 2050.
Overall
, the ages from 15 to 59 made up the largest proportion of Italy or even Yemen
. While
people from
over 60 Change preposition
apply
years
old was
the smallest in Correct subject-verb agreement
were
Yemen
except Italy
. Change preposition
in Italy
In addition
, both the ages from 15 to 59 years
and over 60 years
increased significantly without people from 0-14 years
.
Initially
, individuals from 15-59 years
remained around nearly half in 2000 and rising
to over Wrong verb form
will rise
a
half (57.3%) in 2050 in Correct article usage
apply
Yemen
. It obviously made up around 60 percent
and decreased deeply in 2050.
Change the spelling
per cent
On the other hand
, people in Yemen
from 0-14 years
take
a little bit over a half and dropped gradually Correct word choice
old take
for
around one five. Change preposition
to
Similarity
, in Italy, it simply made up about an over minor percentage and decreased approximately two times in 2050. Replace the word
Similarly
Moreover
, it is a
lowest ratio in Italy. Change the article
the
Last
but not least, the oldest age in Yemen
just take
under 10 percent and enhance a bit in 2050. In Italy, it made up a percentage Verb problem
apply
Change preposition
of aroun
aroun
40 percent and improve dramatically in 2050.Correct your spelling
around
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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