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The charts below give information on the ages of the population of Yemen and Italy in 2000 projections for 2050. Sunrise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information on the ages of the population of Yemen and Italy in 2000 projections for 2050. Sunrise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts provide data about the age of the
people
 in
Yemen
 and Italy for the year 2000 and predictions for 2050. The three age groups illustrated are 0-14
years
, 15_59
years
, and 60+
years
. It is clearly observed that
Yemen
 is expected to remain consistently young in 2050,
while
 Italy's population is projected to change significantly with a substantial rise in elderly residents. In 2000, the majority of the population (50.1%) in
Yemen
 was in 0-14
years
.
However
, most
people
 in Italy were 60+
years
 old (61.6%).
Also
, during
this
 year, the smallest proportion of
people
 was in 60
years
 (3.6%) in
Yemen
,
while
 in Italy 0_14
years
 accounted for the smallest percentage of
people
 (14.3%). With regards to the chart, in 2050, 15_59
years
 old were the most number of
people
 at 57.3% in
Yemen
.
However
, the largest percentage of
people
 in Italy was the elderly in 60+
years
 at 42.3%. It is worth noting that Italy is projected to have a significant
aging
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 population in 2050, and
Yemen
 is predicted to have young inhabitants (57.3%)
this
 year.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, yemen, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Demography
  • Age brackets
  • Projections
  • Population distribution
  • Birth rates
  • Life expectancy
  • Working-age population
  • Elderly demographic
  • Healthcare
  • Socio-economic implications
  • Shrinking workforce
  • Labor force
  • Comparative analysis
  • Young population
  • Aging process
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