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The charts below give information on the ages of the population of Yemen and Italy in 2000 projections for 2050. Sunrise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information on the ages of the population of Yemen and Italy in 2000 projections for 2050. Sunrise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts provide data about the age of the
people
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 in
Yemen
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 and Italy for the year 2000 and predictions for 2050. The three age groups illustrated are 0-14
years
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, 15_59
years
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, and 60+
years
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. It is clearly observed that
Yemen
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 is expected to remain consistently young in 2050,
while
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 Italy's population is projected to change significantly with a substantial rise in elderly residents. In 2000, the majority of the population (50.1%) in
Yemen
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 was in 0-14
years
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.
However
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, most
people
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 in Italy were 60+
years
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 old (61.6%).
Also
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, during
this
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 year, the smallest proportion of
people
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 was in 60
years
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 (3.6%) in
Yemen
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,
while
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 in Italy 0_14
years
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 accounted for the smallest percentage of
people
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 (14.3%). With regards to the chart, in 2050, 15_59
years
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 old were the most number of
people
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 at 57.3% in
Yemen
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.
However
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, the largest percentage of
people
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 in Italy was the elderly in 60+
years
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 at 42.3%. It is worth noting that Italy is projected to have a significant
aging
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ageing
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 population in 2050, and
Yemen
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 is predicted to have young inhabitants (57.3%)
this
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 year.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, yemen, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Demography
  • Age brackets
  • Projections
  • Population distribution
  • Birth rates
  • Life expectancy
  • Working-age population
  • Elderly demographic
  • Healthcare
  • Socio-economic implications
  • Shrinking workforce
  • Labor force
  • Comparative analysis
  • Young population
  • Aging process
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