The charts below provide the primary reason tourists visited Orange City in two different years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two pie charts give information about the main
reason
behind visiting Orange City by tourists in 2006 and 2016.
Fix the agreement mistake
reasons
Overall
, it can be seen that visiting over city for museums was the highest reason in the first year while
going to restaurants was the common in the second year.
To begin
with, the major purposes for travelling to Orange City in 2006 were to go to the annual events and visit museums. The percentage of tourists was at 45 % and 27 % in 2006 respectively. However
, these two reasons decreased sharply to 32 % and 11 % in 2006. Moreover
, the rate of choosing theatre by travellers had a slight drop to 8% in 2016.
On the other hand
, the proportion of going to restaurants experienced a considerable increase from 10 % in 2006 to 41 % in 2016. In addition
, other motives witnessed a gradual growth from 5% to 13% in 2016.Submitted by fatmahaleesa on
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