General task 1 Your next door neighbour own a small dog that bark throughout day and night. Write a letter to your neighbour requesting that something be done about the dog. Your reason for writing. What you would like to happen. A nice respectful style.

Dear Karen, I hope
this
letter finds you well. I am Jessica your neighbour from the next door. I recently noticed that there is a constant barking day and night from a dog and it comes from your house. Adopting a dog can be beautiful.
However
, adaptation can be challenging when your dog is in a new environment with a new owner. I suggest that please check with a vet if your pet is undergoing any health problems to improve
this
situation. I personally believe that consulting with a vet can enhance
this
situation because I cannot concentrate or sleep peacefully.
Furthermore
, I feel that I am not able to perform at work as I usually do and I am having a bad mood. It is crucial to tackle
this
situation promptly because is affecting my own mental and physical health. Congratulations
for
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your new member of your family and thank you for your understanding. Respectfully, Jessica
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single idea per paragraph
Try to make each paragraph focus on a single main idea to improve coherence.
complete response
Ensure all points are fully developed with clear, supporting details to achieve a complete response.
greeting and closing
The greeting and closing are polite and respectful, establishing a nice tone.
suitable writing tone
The writing tone is respectful and appropriate for the situation, making the request politely.
logical structure
The letter has a clear structure with a logical flow from the introduction to the request.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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