The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared. Write a report for a university lecturer
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The given diagrams compare data about old people's education;
moreover
, the bar chart shows their reasons for studying,and the others present information about the people's beliefs about sharing the cost of the old generations' education.
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, it is important that most adult studying for their preference or gain the qualification. Linking Words
In addition
, the Individual is the main factor for sharing costs.
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According to
the bar graph, Interest in the subject, the main reason for studying, hits 40%; Linking Words
then
To gain qualification reaches 2% less than the prior factor. Later helpful for current job scored 22%; Linking Words
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, not only to improve prospects of promotion but Linking Words
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Enjoy learning record the same fraction at one-fifth. Linking Words
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, to be able to change jobs scores 12%. The Linking Words
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one is to meet people which can hit just under one-tenth.
The bar diagram demonstrates that the individual, the initial type of sharing cost, hits 40%; Linking Words
additionally
, Employers' proportion scores 5% less than the previous item. later Taxpayer reports exactly a quarter.Linking Words
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