The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.
The graphs illustrate the changes in having electrical means and how much time spent doing
housework
by households
in a country in a 99-year period between 1920 and 2019.
Overall
, the percentage of electrical appliances saw a significant rise during the mentioned years. However
, there was a drop in number of hours of housework
per week during the period between 1920 and 2019.
If we look at the details, owning a refrigerator rocketed to 90% between households
till 1960 which then
it
Correct pronoun usage
apply
leveled
off at 100% for the rest of the period. Having a vacuum cleaner was partially the same. 30% of Change the spelling
levelled
households
had a vacuum cleaner in 1920, but after experiencing a considerable rise, 100% of them was owning
one in 2000.
Owning a washing machine rose mildly till 1960 and Wrong verb form
owned
then
it dipped in 1980. Subsequently
, it continued its moderate rise till 2019. As regards the amount of time spent doing housework
, the number of hours has been decreased between 1920 and 2019. This
might be caused by increased
use of electrical appliances which helps Correct article usage
the increased
households
doing
the Wrong verb form
do
housework
faster and even with better quality.Submitted by bahram.azizzade on
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