You are being sent on a one month work assignment in San Francisco, California. You need a place to stay while you are there. Write a letter to the Maury Samson Real Estate Agency. In your letter: explain the situation describe the kind of accommodation you would like provide the dates you will need it Begin your letter as follows: Dear Mr Samson, You should write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

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Dear Mr Samson, I am writing to you as I am planning to fly to San Francisco for my

office related

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task. So I need to find a place for my stay. One of my

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suggested

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about

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your agency as he

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had been to San Francisco for

work-related

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the work-related

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trip and he stayed at your place plus he had

good

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experience staying, so he recommended

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this

agency

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As it is just me, a single traveller,

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I just need one room suite. It would be great if food is included as I can pay extra too if required.

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, I will opt for some other services like laundry and wifi if possible.

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, I am not quite interested in gym, swimming and any other activity. Since I am going to land on

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february

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at 1;00pm and will fly back to Canada on

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March

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at 8pm

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I am looking for something to stay in for one month.

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would be happy and grateful if you

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arrrange

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arrange

something

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my preference. Please do contact me if you have any

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regarding anything.

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faithfully Simran

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language precision

Ensure to proofread your letter to check for minor spelling and grammatical errors.

coherence cohesion

Consider using more transition words to enhance the flow between ideas.

task response

The letter clearly explains the situation, describes the accommodation needs, and provides the dates required.

task response

The tone is appropriate for a formal letter, being polite and requesting help.

coherence cohesion

The structure of the letter is logical, connecting each point clearly from the need for accommodation to the specifics desired.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

192 words

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