The diagram below shows the production of olive oil. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.
The diagram presents the different processing procedures to create olive
oil
. The data include
seven major stages.
Correct subject-verb agreement
includes
Overall
, there are various steps to be able to manufacture olive oil
. This
is initially
made by getting the fruit from the olive tree into the last
stage which includes storage and sales of the product.
In detail, in order to create olive oil
, the first step is
picking the olives from the tree and placed in a box to undergo a rinsing process using cold water. After that, olives are positioned in a conveyor belt and will then
be smashed to separate the paste from the olive stones. Furthermore
, to fully extract the oil
from the olives, it must be placed into a bag with holes and pressed hard using the pressing machine. Now, the fully extracted paste is placed in a machine where it will separate water and oil
. Lastly
, the oil
is stored in tubes or containers and will be ready for selling.Submitted by cng123 on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words oil with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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