The graph below shows the number of people taking part in a wildlife survey in Britain between 2001 and 2009. Summarize the information be selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The graph below shows the number of people taking part in a wildlife survey in Britain between 2001 and 2009. Summarize the information be selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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The given table compares data about how many people attended Britania's wildlife survey from 2001 to 2009.
Overall
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, it was important that the number of the population who took part in a wild survey climbed over the period of 8 years.
According to
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the graph, at the start, the Adults, the main group that had high attention in a survey, hit 36,000;
then
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it increased overwhelmingly to 212,000 in 2003 after that, it jumped moderately and reached the vertex at 331,000 in 2007;
however
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, it reduced to the 270,000 in 2009. The picture presents information about in the beginning, the children, the second one in 2001, scored 12,000;
thereafter
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, it rose significantly and in 2003, recorded the number which was the same as adults in 2001;
nevertheless
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, it declined slightly and touched 31,000 in 2007;
although
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, it grew enormously and reported the figure that was the same as an adults' score in 2009.
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