Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Some people are of the view that professionals,
such
as doctors and engineers, must work in the nations where they completed their training, Linking Words
while
others believe that they should have the freedom to fulfil their jobs in another Linking Words
country
if they want to. I am of the latter opinion Use synonyms
due to
the various job opportunities that lie ahead in different places, but I will be discussing the former view as well.
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Firstly
, workers may have learnt about concepts and matters that are unique to the Linking Words
country
where they finished their training. Use synonyms
This
makes the knowledge they gained potentially obsolete in other places Linking Words
due to
the fact that it cannot be applied there. Linking Words
In addition
, these professionals may specialise in matters or subjects that are of concern in that specific Linking Words
country
. Use synonyms
For instance
, China has the highest number of diabetic patients, Linking Words
therefore
, the doctors may be taught more about Linking Words
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disease in comparison to others. Linking Words
Due to
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this
, doctors may not be as good at treating other health matters in different nations.
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On the other hand
, workers should have the freedom to pursue their jobs in a different Linking Words
country
to where they trained. Use synonyms
This
is because different countries may have better job opportunities with better salaries for them. Linking Words
For example
, people who completed a Biomedical Science degree in Malaysia find it tough to find a job there. Linking Words
Furthermore
, the knowledge and wisdom gained by these professionals in a different Linking Words
country
can be shared with the locals of a different nation. With various ideas and inputs, industries can improve drastically.
In conclusion, I think that workers should be allowed to leave the Use synonyms
country
they trained in to allow more freedom and so that they can share their expertise with others.Use synonyms
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task achievement
Ensure that examples are consistently relevant and specific, enhancing the argument's strength.
task achievement
Maintain the balance by giving equal weight to both sides of the argument before giving your opinion.
coherence cohesion
Try using more linking devices to create clearer connections between ideas.
coherence cohesion
The essay has a clear and logical structure, with distinct paragraphs addressing each viewpoint.
coherence cohesion
The introduction clearly states both views and provides a clear thesis statement.
task achievement
Relevant examples, such as the reference to doctors training in China, effectively support the arguments made.