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Last week you were on a flight to London. Unfortunately, when you got off the plane, you left a bag there. You did not remember about the bag until you got to your hotel. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter explain what has happened describe the bag and its contents say what you would like them to do about this problem You should You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
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 letter to request for recovery of my bag which I left on a flight from Toronto to London number "EK 521"
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 week, I was travelling to Manchester city to attend an important business meeting. I was in a rush to reach to hotel on time because I did not have a prior booking for my stay. For that reason, I forgot my hand-carry which I kept in the top compartment located above my seat. The contents inside the bag
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 very important to me, as it has my company's laptop and some documents related to my education. The baggage was black in colour with "Nike" on the front and two tyres at the bottom to pull followed by a long handle with a button in the middle.
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, I would be grateful to you if you could locate my luggage and inform me over the phone as I do not have access to my email from the phone because the credentials are saved on my laptop. I look forward to hearing from you Yours Sincerely Badaruddin Wasef.

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logical structure
Consider breaking down the information about the flight and your purpose of travel into separate sentences for improved clarity.
greeting and closing
Remember to include a gentle concluding sentence, expressing hope for prompt assistance.
greeting and closing
The letter begins with a clear and appropriate salutation and closing.
complete response
The purpose of the letter is clearly stated at the beginning, which provides a clear context for the reader.
suitable writing tone
The tone is formal and appropriate for a letter to an airline.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Airliner, oversight, misplaced, personal belongings, valuable items, sentimental significance, luggage retrieval, lost and found, passenger service, tracking, compensate, verification of ownership, promptly, inconvenience, coordinate, verify, transparent communication
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