At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

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confirmed that the

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percentages are significantly increasing;

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, the number of young adults in some nations

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much more than

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grownups

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the advantages and disadvantages of

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proposal. In regards to the disadvantages, the main drawback is that we will be missing most of the handwork jobs;

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, the farmers, the builders and even the chefs, everything now is being computerized with a lot of technology involved since the new generation is not that much into handwork jobs. We will

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lose a big part of someone recalling our history, sustaining morals and ethics, as they

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grand parents

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are the best role models for the grandchildren.

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, we are living in a very fast-paced world, so having younger generations will result in a significant advantage

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with the latest trends, technologies &

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.

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, young adults are very open-minded and can

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stuff very quickly which

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them a plus

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with

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new electronics,

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iPhone

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, tablets,

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Finally

, having more young adults does have some drawbacks, but with

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we are living we find out , that teenagers are the ones dealing well with all the surroundings rather

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the old generations.