The graph below shows the consumption of three kinds of spreads between 1981 and 2007.

The graph below shows the consumption of three kinds of spreads between 1981 and 2007.
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The line chart compares the amount of three different spreads (margarine, butter low fat and reduced spreads) which were consumed from 1981 to 2007. Units are measured in
grams
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It is clear that
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the number of consumers who consumed low-fat and reduced spreads increased throughout the period from 1981 to 2007.
In contrast
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, the consumption of margarine and butter experienced a decline over the 26-year period. In 1981 approximately 140
grams
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of butter was consumed by people which increased to reach a peak at 160
grams
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in 1991 before falling drastically to about 45
grams
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in 2007.
Likewise
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, around 90
grams
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of margarine was eaten in the first year after which the figure fluctuated slightly and dropped to a low of 40
grams
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in 2007.
On the other hand
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, the consumption of low and reduced spreads was the least favorate among consumers which figure started at about 10
grams
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in 1996 and dramatically rose to the high of just over 80
grams
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in 2001.
This
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figure slightly dropped to around 70
grams
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in the final year.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words grams with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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