The map below is of the town of Canterbury. A new school (S) is planned for the area. The map shows two possible sites for the school.

The map below is of the town of Canterbury. A new school (S) is planned for the area. The map shows two possible sites for the school.
The map illustrates
two
buildings of schools in
a different areas
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different areas
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with
two
main roads in the
two
Canterbury.
Overall
, as can be seen, S2 is located in the centre of the city,
whereas
S1 is close to the
Countryside
.
However
university Locations between the
countryside
and Housing on the north side .
It is clear that
52 is located in the middle of
housing
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the housing
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areas
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area
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tow centre with
two
main roads.
Moreover
, in the Southwest of the
School
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School,
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there are roads from the centre to the
countryside
around 7km which Live 14500, Sitizene.
While
, 5 km to reach the
countryside
, which has a population of 700 people.
On the other hand
, S1 is Located on the west side of the
countryside
.
In addition
, students who
studies
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study
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at both S1 and S2 schools will have the opportunity to go to the university area, which is situated on the north side of
this
map and has the same distance to both Schools.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words two, countryside with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • compare
  • contrast
  • location
  • accessibility
  • residential areas
  • facilities
  • traffic
  • transportation
  • environment
  • cost
  • feasibility
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