The chart shows air pollution levels among four countries in 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart compares 4 major air pollutant amounts in
China
,America,Japan and Australia
in 2012. The units are given in PPM
.
Overall
,the most features belong to the industry,while
the least number account for electricity generation.In addition
, the rates in Australia
show stable PPM
on a bar chart.
According to
Asian countries, Japanese citizens suffered from electricity generation with 15 PPM
while
this
rate in China
was 60. Also
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Also,
this
rate for industrial purposes was 2 times greater in China
80 PPM
and almost 40 PPM
respectively. Finally
, the riskiest air quality was in China
, and the greatest climate is to
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in
Australia
.
Turning to other Nations, America fluctuated in digits of pollutants in 2012 nearly 60 PPM
for the transportation system,almost the
other facilities have the same features with electricity generation and industrial facilities.Correct determiner usage
all the
However
, Australia
remained almost the same statistics 20 PPM
whole year.Submitted by i.nureddinn on
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