For the past year, you have been a member of a local club. Now you want to discontinue your membership. Write a letter to the club secretary. In your letter state what type of membership you have and how you have paid for this give details of how you have benefited from the club explain why you want to leave

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Dear Sir or Madam,

This

letter is to inform you that I intend to terminate my club membership next week. I am currently enjoying the benefits of the annual plan that I purchased on 30 September 2023 through online payment mode using my credit card.

This

is set for auto-renewal next week and my intention is to end it. Since joining your club

last

year, I have always been energetic, happier and

stress free

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. The morning yoga sessions have helped me meditate before work, and the punching bags have always allowed me to vent out my anger and frustration during a tough day. Unfortunately, I am unable to continue with my membership because I am moving to Ireland. I was searching if there is any way to continue my subscription there, but it seems that the chain is not available abroad.

However

, if you decide to launch a club there, I will be happy to rejoin. Awaiting your earnest reply on

this

. Kind Regards, Nilesh Majumdar

Submitted by majumdarnilesh21 on Tue Sep 17 2024

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To enhance the logical structure, consider explicitly stating your type of membership in the opening paragraph.

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You could elaborate a bit more on the benefits you've received from the club to make the letter more engaging.

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Your letter has a clear and organized structure, with each paragraph addressing a separate point.

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The tone of your letter is polite and respectful, which is suitable for this type of correspondence.

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Your closing is very professional and leaves a positive impression.

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

166 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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