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The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph provides data about how much waste was made by three different companies,namely companies A,B, and C, from 2000 to 2015.
Overall
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, it can be clearly seen that the total volume of waste manufactured by
company
Use synonyms
 A and
it
Correct pronoun usage
apply
show examples
show
decline
Correct article usage
a decline
show examples
 throughout the period
while
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company
Use synonyms
 B significantly dropped since the year 2005.
However
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, on the graph history
company
Use synonyms
 C showed that in
coming
Correct article usage
the coming
show examples
 15
year
Change to a plural noun
years
show examples
 it will become one of the best on the bar chart. Regarding
company
Use synonyms
 A, it reached
his
Correct pronoun usage
its
show examples
 peak in 2000 by 12, but it rapidly decreased to approximately 8
at the end
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. In terms of the amount of waste made by
company
Use synonyms
 B
also
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 reached
his
Correct pronoun usage
its
show examples
 top in 2005 by 10 but becoming 10 years taper off to 3 as the lowest level of record manufactured.
According to
Linking Words
company
Use synonyms
 C, it showed an upward trend in the total over 15 years,varying from 4 by 2005 to 10 by 2015.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words company with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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