The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances andthe amount of time spent doing house work in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.
The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical
appliances
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and the
amount
of time spent doing Use synonyms
house work
in Correct your spelling
housework
households
in one country between 1920 and 2019.
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percentage
of Use synonyms
households
with electrical Use synonyms
appliances
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machine
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machines
refrigerator
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refrigerators
vacuum
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cleaners
hours
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households
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housework
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week
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in
1920 to 2019. Change preposition
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percentage
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households
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appliances
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however
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amount
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housework
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decresed
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decreased
in
1920 to 1940.
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amount
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appliances
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what
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which
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machines
vacuum
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refrigerator
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refrigerators
percentage
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by
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hours
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housework
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week
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appliances
in 1940 at 50% and 60% and a decline of Use synonyms
hours
of Use synonyms
housework
by almost 15% changes in 1920 to 1940.
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vacuum
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cleaner
went up rapidly from 1940 to 1980 at 100%.Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
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percentage
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vacuum
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cleaner
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cleaners
appliances
remained constant from 2000 to 2019. The Use synonyms
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machine
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machines
in
1940 to 2000 and Change preposition
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also
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while
the number of Linking Words
hours
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housework
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week
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