The only reason people work hard is to earn more money. There are no other reasons to do it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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individuals to work industriously is to be wealthy. In my view,

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economic concern is a strong motivation, there are

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other incentives,

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as the willingness to repay and maintain the

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which contributes to

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success. Before exploring the non-economic motivations, it is necessary to examine first the idea that working is for

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standpoint is considerably common in a

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, where most things are attached

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a price and

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wealthy people can satisfy any desires as long as they have enough fortunes.

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reality in turn stimulates them to facinately admire the power of

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and confines the aim of working to earn more. Of course, the supporters of

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can defend it with the saying that the desire to earn

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the prosperity of our

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, cannot conceal the selfish nature of

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. As a comparison, the opinion of Rawl, an ethical philosopher, seems to be more reasonable, and noble. He did not

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but only reminded us of one commonly neglected fact that our success is not only a result of our own efforts, but

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a production of our

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,and

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we owe our

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something. For illustration, Elon Musk's Tesla, an e-car company, is under

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development, which, in Rawl's eyes, ought not to be totally attributed to Musk's own efforts, as it would be impossible without a

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to shift toward

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.

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, when

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is accumulating astonishing fortunes, he should bear in mind that he is

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creating

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for our

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. In summary, I can understand the viewpoint that the only aim of working is earning

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for oneself.

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, I cannot totally agree with that since we do not live in isolation, but in a

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, where every achievement, as Rawl said, is a definite symbol of social collaboration, and

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we should

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work for the

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which underlies our success.