The only reason people work hard is to earn more money. There are no other reasons to do it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Currently, people are debating on whether the only incentive

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individuals to work industriously is to be wealthy. In my view,

although

economic concern is a strong motivation, there are

also

other incentives,

such

as the willingness to repay and maintain the

society

which contributes to

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success. Before exploring the non-economic motivations, it is necessary to examine first the idea that working is for

money

.

This

standpoint is considerably common in a

capitalism

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society

, where most things are attached

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a price and

hence

wealthy people can satisfy any desires as long as they have enough fortunes.

This

reality in turn stimulates them to facinately admire the power of

money

and confines the aim of working to earn more. Of course, the supporters of

this

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can defend it with the saying that the desire to earn

money

objectively

prompt

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the prosperity of our

society

, which,

however

, cannot conceal the selfish nature of

such

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blindly

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pursure

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pursuit

of

money

. As a comparison, the opinion of Rawl, an ethical philosopher, seems to be more reasonable, and noble. He did not

contrieve

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contrive

contrived

to repress economic motivation

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but only reminded us of one commonly neglected fact that our success is not only a result of our own efforts, but

also

a production of our

society

,and

therefore

we owe our

society

something. For illustration, Elon Musk's Tesla, an e-car company, is under

vigrous

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vigorous

development, which, in Rawl's eyes, ought not to be totally attributed to Musk's own efforts, as it would be impossible without a

society

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to shift toward

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.

Therefore

, when

Musk's

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is accumulating astonishing fortunes, he should bear in mind that he is

also

creating

money

for our

society

. In summary, I can understand the viewpoint that the only aim of working is earning

money

for oneself.

However

, I cannot totally agree with that since we do not live in isolation, but in a

society

, where every achievement, as Rawl said, is a definite symbol of social collaboration, and

hence

we should

also

work for the

society

which underlies our success.