Nowadays more and more tasks at home and at work are being performed by robots. Why do you think it’s happening? Is it a negative or positive development?
Home and work-related tasks are being done by robots in current times ,where human have increased their dependency on robots as well.
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, capitalised Businesses in Developed Colonies like the USA and Japan have created Robots that can perform even some complex tasks.Linking Words
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, Future Generation parents have the opportunity to use these mechanical cyborgs as assistants for their children's lives to enhance their knowledge and skills to a higher level ,which could not be acquired through teachers ,as the education fees have risen a lot in the past few decades ,and not all kind of people are able to provide education to their children's.
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structure
Improve the logical structure by clearly separating the positive and negative points in distinct paragraphs and using cohesive devices more effectively to guide the reader through your arguments.
task response
Provide more specific examples to strengthen your arguments. For instance, mention how robots are affordable or which specific robotic technologies are being used in homes and workplaces.
introduction conclusion
The introduction sets the context well, and the conclusion effectively summarizes the main points.
balanced view
The essay presents a balanced view by addressing both the positive and negative aspects of robots in daily life.
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