Write a letter to tour operator regarding walking tour in mountain

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Dear Tour Operator, Hope
this
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letter finds you well and you are in good health and in high spirits.I am writing
this
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letter to tell you that I have seen your advertisement on my phone regarding the
one week
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one-week
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walking tour in the mountains next week. Well , my name is Navdeep and I am a fitness trainer by profession. So I have a huge interest in doing physical activities
such
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as walking tours in
mountains
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the mountains
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.But ,sadly my left side knee got broken
while
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doing exercise at the gym.
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,I am a little worried about my knee because climbing in the mountains requires a fit body and good stamina.
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, I want to ask you
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that
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if
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is there any doctor team
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that is
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is
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that is
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going with us. So that If required I can take help from them.
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this
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, please tell me if there
any
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is any
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slot left because my girlfriend
also
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wants to join me. Looking forward to hearing from your side and if required you can call me for more information. with regards, Navdeep

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task achievement
Ensure your message is concise, especially statements like 'Hope this letter finds you well and you are in good health and in high spirits.'
coherence cohesion
You could make use of clear paragraph breaks for each new point, such as discussing your knee, asking about doctors, and your girlfriend joining.
task achievement
The letter maintains a polite and respectful tone, well suited to a formal inquiry.
coherence cohesion
Clear opening and closing sections help the reader easily understand the purpose of the letter.
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