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You have recently left something in a train, write a letter to the manager of lost and found department and specify. • When you lost it • Describe the object you have left • Tell the manager what you want them to do with it

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing in connection with my lost
camera
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while
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 travelling
form
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from
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 Shimla to Delhi
last
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 Tuesday. I would like to inform
that
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you that
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 I boarded Delhi Express early in the morning and placed my luggage near my seat number 451.During the journey, I had several bags with me including my
camera
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 case, which I forgot to take with me when I left the train at Delhi station.
This
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 is an urgent matter as being a professional photographer, it is hard for me to deliver photographs to my clients. Kindly allow me to describe some salient features of the
camera
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. It is a black
colored
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coloured
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 sleek model of Canon having two extra magnifying lenses
in
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on
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 its cover. Kindly note that it has a scorpion sticker on its backside, which will assist in finding it . Would you kindly inform me after you find the
camera
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 at your earliest convenience
.
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?
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 I would appreciate it if you could send my
camera
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 back to
my
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the
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 address written on the ticket attached. The amount involved in the process would be paid by me. I admire your assistance in
this
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 matter. Your's
faithfully
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faithful
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, Kirandeep Kaur

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greeting and closing
Consider using a salutation like "Dear Sir or Madam" at the beginning and then follow a natural flow to conclude your letter with "Yours faithfully."
single idea per paragraph
Be sure to clearly separate distinct ideas into different paragraphs. The letter generally accomplishes this, but further separation and transition signals could enhance clarity.
greeting and closing
The opening and closing are appropriate and polite, following the conventions of formal letter writing.
logical structure
The letter logically presents the situation, the description of the object, and the action needed by the manager, showing a sound logical structure.
complete response
There's a clear description of when the item was lost, how it looks, and what action is requested, meeting the task requirement appropriately.
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