You have borrowed something from your friend and you have accidentally damaged it. Write a letter to your friend to your friend to remind him/her of: • What you borrowed • How you damaged it • What you'll do about it

Dear Pramod, I

hope

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hope to

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find

this

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letter you in good health and best spirits. I am writing

this

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letter to inform you

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that

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your

laptop

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was broken by me.

Firsly

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Firstly

, thank you for your help in my hard time by giving

laptop

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Last

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week, you gave me your

laptop

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to complete my assignment because my

laptop

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was not working properly.

Accidentlly

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Accidentally

, I damaged your

laptop

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. Yesterday, I put the

laptop

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on the table

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then

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and then

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I was making

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apply

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tea in

kitchen

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the kitchen

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. My son was

palying

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playing

with a ball and he

throw

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threw

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a ball

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the

laptop

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Immidately

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Immediately

, I checked the

laptop

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but the screen was not working.

Also

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, the body of

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laptop

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the laptop

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was broken. Don't

woory

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worry

about it. I will install a new screen

as well as

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body

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a body

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through the best technician. If It

will

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not possible to fix it, I will give you a new

laptop

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in the next week. I hope we will meet very soon at

University

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the University

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. Best regards, Urvesh

Darshita@8612

Oct 25, 2024

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coherence cohesion

Make sure to maintain a logical flow throughout the letter, and avoid unrelated ideas in the same paragraph.

task achievement

Ensure that all parts of the task are answered clearly and thoroughly expressed without omitting key information.

task achievement

Expresses empathy and responsibility towards the situation with a sincere tone, which is appropriate for the context.

coherence cohesion

The letter uses an opening and closing that aligns with the informal and personal nature of the situation.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
16
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

163 words

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