In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own countries. Nowadays, they have more opportunities to study abroad. What are the advantages and the disadvantages of this development?
People nowadays have more opportunities to study abroad than in the past.
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phenomenon has both benefits and drawbacks. The benefit is that student can enhance their knowledge in countries with Linking Words
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better education systems
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, it reduces the Linking Words
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as Indonesia have a lower rank of Linking Words
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education
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the education
country
with a better academic system will expose the Use synonyms
students
to more knowledge and increase the quality of people. Use synonyms
Besides
, they can acquire more insight through interaction with classmates from various backgrounds, and Linking Words
as a result
, it will broaden their perspective. In Indonesia, Linking Words
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students
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students
are able to deepen their knowledge and contribute even more after they come back.
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On the other hand
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education
sector contributes to the government's gross domestic profit or GDP, the low Use synonyms
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country
will reduce the GDP as well. The universities charge their Use synonyms
students
with a tuition fee to develop the facilities and if the enrolled Use synonyms
students
are below expectations, it will affect the development. In the chemistry major, Use synonyms
for instance
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thus
the undergraduates and postgraduates can obtain proper lab experiences and Linking Words
as a consequence
of the low Linking Words
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, they can not maintain it properly.
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To conclude
, the increase in the opportunities for Linking Words
students
to study abroad in the Use synonyms
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also
increases the people's quality because they can obtain a better Linking Words
education
and implement it after they go back. Use synonyms
However
, it leads to a decrease Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
students
in the Use synonyms
country
and affects the GDP and Use synonyms
education
facilities development.Use synonyms
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