The diagram below shows how to recycle organic waste to produce garden fertilizer (compost). Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows how to recycle organic waste to produce garden fertilizer (compost). Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The illustration below depicts the process of

making

Verb problem

turning

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the

Correct article usage

apply

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organic

waste

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into fertilizer. It starts with collecting organic

waste

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in a

container

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and

heat

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heating

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it within six months before it turns into a fertilizer.

Firstly

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, we need a 2

liters

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litres

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plastic

container

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and make holes in some sides of it to let the air circulate. After that, collect the organic

waste

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such

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as newspapers, plants, and food

waste

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make

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and make

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sure that each

categorizes

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category

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are

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no more than 15 cm

height

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in height

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to give a space inside the

container

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The next step

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is pour

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is to pour

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hot water and nitrogen at the same time into the

container

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, make sure to close the

container

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and heat it, the hot air will

blown

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be blown

blow

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out from the holes and

then

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it will slowly

changing

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change

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into the extraction of the

waste

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This

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process

conducts

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is conducted

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within 6 months before it turns into compost that will be ready to fertilize the plants.

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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.

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5
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
12
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

2 paragraphs

152 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

recycle
organic waste
garden fertilizer
compost
diagram
main features
comparisons
overview
collection
shredding
mixing
addition
water
bacteria
turning
aerating
pile
maturation
filtering
final product
before and after

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