You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows how to recycle organic waste to produce garden fertilizer (compost). Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing Task 1

The illustration below depicts the process of
making
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turning
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the
Correct article usage
apply
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organic
waste
into fertilizer. It starts with collecting organic
waste
in a
container
and
heat
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heating
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it within six months before it turns into a fertilizer.
Firstly
, we need a 2
liters
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litres
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plastic
container
and make holes in some sides of it to let the air circulate. After that, collect the organic
waste
such
as newspapers, plants, and food
waste
,
make
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and make
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sure that each
categorizes
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category
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are
Correct subject-verb agreement
is
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no more than 15 cm
height
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in height
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to give a space inside the
container
.
The next step
is pour
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is to pour
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hot water and nitrogen at the same time into the
container
, make sure to close the
container
and heat it, the hot air will
blown
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be blown
blow
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out from the holes and
then
it will slowly
changing
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change
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into the extraction of the
waste
.
This
process
conducts
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is conducted
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within 6 months before it turns into compost that will be ready to fertilize the plants.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
Vocabulary: Replace the words waste, container with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • recycle
  • organic waste
  • garden fertilizer
  • compost
  • diagram
  • main features
  • comparisons
  • overview
  • collection
  • shredding
  • mixing
  • addition
  • water
  • bacteria
  • turning
  • aerating
  • pile
  • maturation
  • filtering
  • final product
  • before and after
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