You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows how to recycle organic waste to produce garden fertilizer (compost). Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing Task 1
The illustration below depicts the process of
making
Verb problem
turning
the
organic Correct article usage
apply
waste
into fertilizer. It starts with collecting organic waste
in a container
and heat
it within six months before it turns into a fertilizer.
Wrong verb form
heating
Firstly
, we need a 2 liters
plastic Change the spelling
litres
container
and make holes in some sides of it to let the air circulate. After that, collect the organic waste
such
as newspapers, plants, and food waste
, make
sure that each Correct word choice
and make
categorizes
Replace the word
category
are
no more than 15 cm Correct subject-verb agreement
is
height
to give a space inside the Change preposition
in height
container
. The next step
is pour
hot water and nitrogen at the same time into the Change the verb form
is to pour
container
, make sure to close the container
and heat it, the hot air will blown
out from the holes and Change the verb form
be blown
blow
then
it will slowly changing
into the extraction of the Wrong verb form
change
waste
. This
process conducts
within 6 months before it turns into compost that will be ready to fertilize the plants.Wrong verb form
is conducted
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