The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph
illustrate
the Change the verb form
illustrates
number
of shops
and the number
of new shops
that opened in one specified country between 2011 and 2018.
Overall
,if we looked at the given data closures and openings shops
decreased over the 7 years.
Looking at the details for closures, the Change preposition
of shops
number
of new stores was more than 6000 in 2011.Then
fluctuate
until 2014,sharply fell during 1 year,again dramatically rose to more than 5000 in 2016 and Wrong verb form
fluctuated
come
back to 5000.Wrong verb form
came
Finally
, it almost levelled off from 2016 to 2018.
The number
of new shops
opening was at a peak of more than 8000 in 2011.First significantly declined,then
grew from 2011 to 2014.According to
given data openings dipped to 4000 in 2015 and hover
from 2015 to 2016. Wrong verb form
hovered
After
this
slightly peaked and reached to
3000 Change preposition
apply
at the end
of the period.Submitted by i.nureddinn on
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