The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph
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the
number
of
shops
and the
number
of new
shops
that opened in one specified country between 2011 and 2018.
Overall
,if we looked at the given data closures and openings
shops
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of shops
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decreased over the 7 years. Looking at the details for closures, the
number
of new stores was more than 6000 in 2011.
Then
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until 2014,sharply fell during 1 year,again dramatically rose to more than 5000 in 2016 and
come
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back to 5000.
Finally
, it almost levelled off from 2016 to 2018. The
number
of new
shops
opening was at a peak of more than 8000 in 2011.First significantly declined,
then
grew from 2011 to 2014.
According to
given data openings dipped to 4000 in 2015 and
hover
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from 2015 to 2016.
After
this
slightly peaked and reached
to
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3000
at the end
of the period.
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