The graph shows the income of four cafés in New York over last year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features. Make comparisons where relevant
The line graph provides information about the changing trends in café
income
for four types of café (The tea room, Wi-fi café, Internet express
, Capitalize word
Express
Café
Correct word choice
and Café
cool
) over the period from Capitalize word
Cool
January
to December
of last
year.
It can be clearly seen that New York’s cafe earned the largest amount of money on the Tea room type while
the least amount of income
was earned by café cool between January
to October.
Starting at about 160,000 dollars
in January
, the tea room income
rose over the next two months to a peak of nearly 180,000 dollars
in march
before Capitalize word
March
dropped
dramatically to approximately about 60,000 Wrong verb form
dropping
dollars
in December
. Income
of café cool earned Correct article usage
The income
however
was the lowest of all income
trend
, beginning at about 30,000 Fix the agreement mistake
trends
dollars
in January
and rising to 120,000 dollars
by December
.
Meanwhile, the trend for Wi-fi café and Internet Express showed some fluctuation from month to month, there was also
an increase in income
that was earned from about 50,000 dollars
and 100,000 dollars
to about 190,000 dollars
and 140,000 dollars
in December
, respectively.
It is noticeable that the income
for Wi-fi
café is the highest in the winter months than the other three café.Correct article usage
the Wi-fi
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Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words café, income, january, december, dollars with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "express" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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