You are a member of an International Students' club. The club is organising an event to celebrate popular food from around the world. Write a letter to the event organiser, Luis. In your letter • offer to make a popular dish from your country • describe what this dish is • explain why it should be included in the event

Hi Luis, I'm writing
this
email regarding
about
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the
food
event
is
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going to happen in a few days in our club. I would like to request to add
few
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a few
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items
(dosa and idly)
in
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the
food
menu. In our club, the majority of students are
indian
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,
adding
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and adding
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this menu
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this menu item
these menu items
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items
in
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our
food
menu definitely gain profit from
this
event.
In addition
, even some
of
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local people
also
love to eat
this
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these items
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items
. Especially providing
offer
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an offer
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to
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this
item, more people are very interested
to attend
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this
event to grab the offer.
This
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This food item
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food
items
is very special
food
in our country, it
has contain
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more protein and nutrition in it.
In addition
, we can customize the
items
in different
items
. Hoping for
the
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positive response. Regards Dhivya Ravi
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general
Ensure each paragraph has a single central idea.
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Try to maintain a clear logical flow between sentences.
task achievement
You addressed the task by offering to add specific dishes, describing them, and explaining their significance.
task achievement
The letter maintains a polite and suitable tone for the task.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are appropriate and courteous.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Enthusiastic
  • Contribution
  • Cuisine
  • Traditional
  • Ingredients
  • Preparation
  • Cultural significance
  • Celebrate
  • Diversity
  • Culinary traditions
  • National dish
  • Occasion
  • Unique attributes
  • Preparation method
  • Gourmet
  • Authentic
  • Flavorful
  • Recipe
  • Event arrangements
  • Showcase
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