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Band 8

2. You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter: explain why you have moved describe the new house invite your friend to come and visit

#house #friend #visit
Dear John, I hope that you are doing well. I’m writing
this
 letter to inform you that my family and I have moved to a new
house
 next week.
First,
let me tell you the reason. My father has been awarded as the best employee in the company.
As a result
, he has to move from the main branch as a senior manager. The location of the new office is quite far from the main city, and the most fascinating thing is that the company provides a new
house
. So, we decided to move there.
Secondly
, let me describe my new
house
. It has three bedrooms, and you know the most fascinating thing is that it has a more spacious living room. So, we can easily arrange all the furniture.
In addition
, it has a big garden.
Although
 all the facilities are very well, we try to manage the parking space.
Moreover
. I have decided to celebrate my father’s achievements with my friends and family. I have organized a small party at my new
house
. I will be happy if you can join us with your family. Hoping to see you soon. Best regards, Prinsy
Submitted by pramodv997 on

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accuracy
Make sure to review the letter for small grammatical errors. For example, "to a new house next week" should be "to a new house last week" if the move has already happened.
coherence
Ensure a smoother transition between ideas. For instance, the transition between the reasons for the move and describing the new house could be a bit more seamless with a linking sentence.
task achievement
The letter provides a complete response to the task by explaining the reasons for moving, describing the new house, and extending an invitation.
coherence
The greeting and closing are appropriately used, creating a friendly and inviting tone.
coherence
Clear paragraphs focus on specific ideas which helps in maintaining structure.
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