It is important for all towns and cities to have large public outdoor places like squares and parks. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Town and

citiy

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city

arrangement

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is

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tend to be more and more complicated, since the use of an area is getting various.

To

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some

reasons

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, the

government

choose

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chose

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to put some large squares or

parks

, which attracts many

arguements

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arguments

about the importance and the

nessecity

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necessity

of setting up

such

places. I absolutely agree that it is very meaningful to include those

public use

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space

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in city or town planning.

First,

as economic growth

being

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greater, people's needs in daily life are no longer

some

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apply

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food and drink. Their utility

are

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mainly

come

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from entertainment, which means that the need is

transfered

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transferred

from just physical things to those that can satisfy

spirit

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.

For example

, in some big cities or towns, because of the demanding living standard, residents will ask for some

parks

for running or jogging, and some outdoor theatres for

misical

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musical

plays and movies on a square. Especially for the old, who are in the group that enjoy themselves in numerous

acitivities

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activities

.

As a result

, after considering the health condition of people in those areas, the

government

finally

choose

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that plan to meet their needs.

Furthermore

,

buiding

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building

large public outdoor places can

also

have

positive

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effect

to

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the environment. Less

using

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of glasses and other materials that are used in structure

buiding

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building

can reduce the waste of natural resources,

therefore

more resources can be protected and saved during these

process

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.

In addition

, those outdoor places can mitigate the air

pollusion

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pollution

, which will prove that the

government

is strive

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for society's satisfaction.

For instance

, the setting of

parks

will bring a huge number of trees, which can clean at least the air

surrouding

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surrounding

. More rivers

also

have a role that

control

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the

sharply

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change in temperature, and if there is a spring,

then

the drinking water of that area won't be a great problem.

According to

that,

we

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neighberhood

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neighbourhood

is likely to be dynamic.

However

, different perspectives always exist. Some critics

argued

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that those like squares and

parks

take away so much space that people sometimes even cannot find somewhere to park their cars. That seems to be a serious problem, but the difficulty usually

reflect

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unique opportunities. We can change the lifestyle start from now, and push the progress of declining carbon emissions. Cities, towns and

us are

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we

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all need those

landscape

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landscapes

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to improve the future of our generation and the

followings

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following

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. In conclusion, I totally agree that it is important and necessary enough for a

government

to decide to add large public space. That work means a lot for many parts of our lives. It is indeed a step towards the perfect structure of society.