The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given line graph illustrates the
number
of closures
Correct your spelling
closured
shops
and the number
of opening shops
for a territory in time trend
2011 and 2018.
Overall
, shops
that opened had a fluctuating trend
in the time frame. Similarly
, shops
that closed fluctuated in the same trajectory.
The number
of shops
that closed was nearly 6000 below the opening shops
in 2011 followed by a decline to reach 6000 and passing the shops
that opened in 2012 additionally
the closures shops
had an upward trend
to attain approximately 7000 above all
times, in 2013. Then
it had a decline to hit about 6300 in 2014 subsequently
it had a sharp decrease to reach the lowest number
in the trajectory near 1000 in 2015. Then
after that, it had a sharp rise to reach 5000 in 2016 and then
it almost remained at the same level for the years 2017 and 2018.
The shops
that opened were roughly 8500 in 2011 and at the highest level in the time frame. Subsequently
, the opening shops
had a drop to 4000 in 2012 followed by an upward trend
to reach 6000 in 2014. Furthermore
, it had a fall to hit 4000 which was above of the closure shops
in 2015. Then
after, it remained at the same level in 2016 and 2017, although
it had a small rise in 2017. And then
, it had a downward trend
to attain 3000.Submitted by mkhdermani on
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