The table shows results of 2 surveys done in 1980 and 2010 on various aspects of city living on a particular city.Units are measured in percentage

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The table shows results of 2 surveys done in 1980 and 2010 on various aspects of city living on a particular city.Units are measured in percentage

The tables illustrate surveys in 1980 and 2010. The tables survey

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six aspects of city living:

education

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healthcare

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, environment,

shops

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, employment, and

transport

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. Data are divided into 3 categories: Good, Neither good nor bad, and bad. "In the 'Good'

category

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healthcare

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received the highest rating,

while

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transportation received the lowest. In the 'Neither Good Nor Bad'

category

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healthcare

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had the lowest rating,

while

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shops

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had the highest. In the 'Bad'

category

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education

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received the lowest rating, and transportation the highest." In 1980,

healthcare

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received the highest good rating at 82%

while

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transport

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had the lowest at 52%. By 2010,

education

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reached the rating top “Good” at 82%,

whereas

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transport

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fell to 39%. The

transport

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declined by 13% from 1980. Environment remained relatively stable with a slight decrease from 72% to 71%.

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, in 1980, the lowest

percentage

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of "Neither good nor bad" was in

healthcare

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at 10%,

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the highest was in

shops

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at 24%. In 2010,

this

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category

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was the highest in

shops

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at 24% and the lowest was in employment at 5%. In 1980,

education

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had the lowest "Bad"

percentage

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at 5%,

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transportation had the highest

percentage

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at 32%. In 2010, the "Bad"

percentage

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for

education

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increased to 9%, increasing by 4% from 1980. The highest rating for

transport

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was 38%.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words education, healthcare, shops, transport, category, percentage with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
6
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

217 words

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percentage
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urban planning
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quality of life
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development
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