The chart below shows the number of adults participating in different major sports in one area, in 1997 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the information about how many
people
participate
in seven types of Wrong verb form
participated
sports
in 1997 and 2017
Overall
it can be seen that Tennis was the most interesting sports
in both years ,Fix the agreement mistake
sport
whereas
In 1997, Around 50,000 people
showed interest in Tennis,which is the highest number
of all sports
.The other sports
,which were swimming,golf, rugby and football had approximately the same number
of adults at around above
30,000.Followed closely by Cricket which was 25,000 and the least participated sport was basketball at below 10,000.
In 2017,Tennis had more Change preposition
apply
people
participating than in 1997 and still had the highest number
of people
which was 55,000.Although
Football
and Rugby the Change preposition
in Football
number
of adults increased to below 50,000,Golf and swimming had the same number
of adults at above 30,000.The rest were Cricket which
the Correct pronoun usage
apply
number
was
significantly decreased to 8,000 Unnecessary verb
apply
whereas
basketball seemed to had
more Change the verb
have
people
at 22,000.Submitted by chawanat.pla on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, sports, number with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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