IELTS Writing Correction Service /
Writing Samples /
Band 5

Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre to save money. Write a letter to your council. In your letter -Give details on how you and your family use the centre. -explain why the centre is important for the local community. -describe the potential effects on local people if the centre closes.

#council #sports #leisure #centre #money #-give #-explain #community #-describe #effects #people
Dear James, I hope things are well, I finished my project and got my salary perfectly, so I want to go on a trip for one week and I am alone,
moreover
 sending the letter to you. Anyway, my plan is great ideas
such
 as travelling to France , especially Paris going to nightclubs, going to shore and swimming. I will try payment for all the costs of
this
 trip like the reserved hotel, the cost of food and other shopping. I want to invite you for a vacation, James what are doing? James, please accept my request why in the past very good with you. best wishes, Mohsen
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Task Achievement
Ensure you address the specific task requirements, such as explaining how you and your family use the sports and leisure centre.
Coherence and Cohesion
Maintain a clear paragraph structure focusing on one idea per paragraph to enhance clarity.
Coherence and Cohesion
The letter opens with a friendly greeting and closes with a warm sign-off, adding a personal touch.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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