The table below shows the household composition in a North American country from 1970 and 2003. Summarize information and make comparison where relevant.
The table chart illustrates the mix of
household
in Fix the agreement mistake
households
a
North America Correct article usage
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with
the years Change preposition
in
range
1970 and 2003.
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Overall
, the percentage of married couple
led in 2 years. Fix the agreement mistake
couples
While
the proportion
of non-family household
increased dramatically.
In 1970 the arrangement of Fix the agreement mistake
households
mother
with her Add an article
a mother
the mother
kid
was 9%. Slightly
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A slightly
less
percentage had Correct word choice
smaller
father
with his Add an article
a father
kid
. The leader of this
year-married couple
,
had approximately Remove the comma
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two-third
of Correct your spelling
two-thirds
overall
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the overall
proportion
. The lowest figure in this
year is room sharing. Just for
1% more had people who lived as a single. The 3% more than one-tenth had Change preposition
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member
who shared a room.
2 indexes rose significantly in 2003. The opposite trend was with married Fix the agreement mistake
members
couple
. More precisely the Fix the agreement mistake
couples
proportion
of room sharing and single person jumped from 3% and 4% to 11% and 13% respectively. Whereas
, the proportion
of married couple
dropped exactly 20% and had 41% in 2003. The figures Fix the agreement mistake
couples
such
as mother with kid
and father with kid
added 1% to their performance which was in 1970.Submitted by bizhanalikhan6 on
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