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The diagram shows the process for labelling shellfish for the international market. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

The diagram shows the process for labelling shellfish for the international market. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
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The diagram illustrates how shellfish are
labeled
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labelled
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 for international markets. The process of marking with barcodes contains a few stages, which I will discuss in
this
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Overall
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, the process of
labeling
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labelling
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 and generating product codes for sea
products
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such
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 as
mollusks
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molluscs
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 is not complicated, but it plays a key role in people's lives as it simplifies the information given in general. The process of marking contains a few steps from taking information
where
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 boats with goods are located,
then
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, the responsible person receives the data about the ships' location, after that, he transfers the data to the marking system in order to generate barcodes.
This
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 is followed by shellfish processing, where
products
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 are cleaned of unnecessary additives and dried. After that, the processed
products
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 are delivered all over the world by various transports
such
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 as planes or lorries, and
then
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 the goods get to international stores. The sequence of
labeling
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labelling
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 starts with monitoring shellfish boats via satellites from a monitor in Santiago, numerous ships may be located in different parts of the world.
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, a responsible person sends data to the general
center
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centre
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 for tagging barcodes. Having caught
mollusks
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molluscs
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, the
labeling
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labelling
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 system begins generating
a product codes
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product codes
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 to certify the catch.
The next step is
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 that the sea
products
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 go to a processing plant, where the goods are cleaned of inappropriate additives and
then
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 dried in order to keep them fresh. After that, they are sent to international markets by either planes or lorries.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "such".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words products with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
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