Musicc has playd in every society and culture in the world today.some people think music only benefits to individual and socity .other however think that music can have a negative influence . Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Nowadays,

music

is a part of every nation and culture in the

world

. It is believed that it just

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advantages for both

people

and

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society

,

however

, others, myself included, subscribe to the view that it can have some disadvantages. On the one hand, it

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that

music

is

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to boost morale and give positive energy to the individuals who are listening to it.

Also

, it is believed that some

musics

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music

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are

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effective for better

consentration

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concentration

and by listening to them the

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of the brain would be changed effectively.

Furthermore

, some

people

claim that

music

is

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common language which can bond

people

all around the

world

. There are many international musicians in the

world

who hold international concerts and their

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fans

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feel bonded together.

For instance

, BTS is an Asian group which is popular among many individuals around the

world

.

On the other hand

,

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the advantages, there are some setbacks like lowering

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morale.

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number of

people

could

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their morale when they

listening

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to a sad track. There are

also

reports

which

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some individuals

commite

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commit

commute

a

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suicide after listening to the particular

tarack

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topic

.

Moreover

, Some teenagers are heavily under the influence of

music

and musicians.

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Therefore

, if a musician had promoted harmful behaviours, they would be affected by them. To illustrate, an Iranian singer

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musician named Tataloo, who is

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arrested

now, had promoted harmful

behavior

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behaviour

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such

as using drugs in his tracks

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social media. In conclusion, despite the fact that there are some benefits

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music

like lifting

people

's spirits

along with

positive influence on some mental

problem

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problems

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and bonding

people

from different

culture

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cultures

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and

nation

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nations

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together, its drawbacks like the negative

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effects

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of sad

music

and promoting damaging behaviours should not be neglected.