Some people think that governments should give financial support to creative artists such as painters and musicians. Others believe that creative artists should be funded by alternative sources. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

While

some contend that

governments

are responsible for artists' funding, others argue that creative painters and musicians should use alternative financial

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. I am of the opinion that both

governments

and small businesses should allocate money for these

activities

. On the one hand, there is a call for

governments

to provide adequate funding for painting displays and music performances, as

this

act can bring about benefits at societal levels.

Firstly

, national musics foster a sense of patriotism among citizens.

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turn, can benefit the whole society as people become more empathetic, and their contribution to social

activities

such

as voting and community service increases.

Secondly

, by becoming a stakeholder in these exhibitions,

governments

can address demanding issues effectively. Paintings that illustrate a dismal future and its correlation with human

activities

can raise awareness, and encourage people toward a more sustainable lifestyle. The more cognizant citizens become, the sooner the situation will be remedied.

However

, it is inevitable that using other sources not only alleviates the pressure imposed on

governments

but

also

enables artists to bring about impartial work. One of the main reasons

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why people are concerned about the government's funding is the existence of pressing issues. Indeed, there are many environmental problems,

such

as pollution and animal extinction that require immediate attention, in the face of which allocating money for painters and musicians pale.

Moreover

, works funded by

governments

are usually biased and in favour of their profit. These displays are in stark contrast with the nature of art and force artists to find alternative sources,

such

as small businesses and charities for their exhibitions.

For instance

, it would be unattainable to illustrate politicians' caricatures in an exhibition funded by

governments

. These restrictions, which contradict the character of art, necessitate pursuing other sources. In conclusion, finding the right source for artistic

activities

is something that divides opinions.

Although

I

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the reasons based on which one is usually considered to outweigh the other, I believe that

goverenments

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governments

and small businesses hold equal responsibility in addressing the issue.