You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below shows the amount of money given to developing countries from five organisations from 2008 to 2011. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. You should write at least 150 words.
The table depicts the total money given from five unknown participants to developing countries between 2008 and 2011.
Overall
, all provider's
spending increased and Fix the agreement mistake
providers'
fluctuatived
Correct your spelling
fluctuated
fluctuations
while
both the fourth and the fifth organisations decreased between
the period.
As we can see, at the beginning year, the first group donated around 0.5 Change preposition
during
billion
dollars
then
increased to almost hit
1 Verb problem
apply
billion
dollars
and dropped back and steady at 0.75 billion
dollars
respectively. As the highest givers, second
association constantly rose starting from 1.25, 1.5, Correct article usage
the second
2.48
and Correct word choice
and 2.48
reach
more than 2.5 Wrong verb form
reaching
billion
dollars
in 2011. Moreover
, third
Correct article usage
the third
participants
money ran the same from Change noun form
participant's
beginning
to the end period at 1.5 Correct article usage
the beginning
billion
dollars
.
whilst the last
two group
constantly decreased their money where the fourth organiser Change to a plural noun
groups
at
the first year put 0.75 Change preposition
in
dollars
then
dropped back to under 0.5 in the next three year
. Same with the fifth that Fix the agreement mistake
years
firstly
participated by giving more than 1 billion
dollars
and close
it by only spending under 0.5 Wrong verb form
closed
billion
dollars
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Vocabulary: Replace the words billion, dollars with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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