The graph shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metal during 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line diagram illustrates how the price of
copper
, nickel
and zinc
has changed in 2014.
Overall
, it is clearly seen that nickel
experienced the
downfall trend, Correct article usage
a
while
copper
and zinc
were pretty stable in the given time period.
In January, nickel
's price was 6% higher in comparison to the previous month
, while
the figures for copper
and zinc
were 2% and 1% respectively. However
, in the next month
it experienced Add a comma
month,
decline
for Correct article usage
a decline
nickel
and copper
, while
it was growing for zinc
. In the next 3 months
the prices were stable.
In June Add a comma
months,
zinc
and nickel
dropped in the
price significantly Correct article usage
apply
with
3% and 1% respectively and were Change preposition
by
overtook
by Wrong verb form
overtaken
copper
. However
, in the next month
prices of all metals grew and stayed at the same level for the next 3 months. Although
,
Remove the comma
apply
Correct article usage
a slightly
slightly
drop in prices happened in October, all three metals were in Change the word
slight
positive
part of the table in the next Add an article
the positive
month
with 0.5%, 1%, 1.5
% for Correct word choice
and 1.5
copper
, nickel
and zinc
respectively.Submitted by isakov.iv1 on
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words copper, nickel, zinc, month with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
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