You recently booked a part-time course at a college. You now need to cancel your booking. Write a letter to the college admministrator. In your letter. say which part-time course you booked explain why you need to cacel your booking ask about booking a different course

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my appreciation for the part-time

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I booked but I made a mistake

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that program. When I had chosen

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part-time

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I booked I had not read the full information about the

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so I could change

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program. In

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course

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, there is a lot of info about computer programs but there is no information on programming electronic devices.I received incomplete information from my friends. Could you help me to choose a suitable one for me and explain all things about

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, I need you to cancel the previous

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possible. I hope for your understanding. I apologize for the inconvenience and for taking up your time. Please respond at your earliest convenience to resolve

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issue. Yours faithfully, Artyom Gendlin

Submitted by genartem1986 on Fri Jan 10 2025

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task achievement

This letter successfully covers all the necessary points but could better explain why a different course might be more suitable.

coherence and cohesion

The logical flow of ideas is good but could be slightly enhanced by ensuring a more fluid transition between expressing the mistake and requesting help to choose a new course.

coherence and cohesion

You have used an appropriate greeting and closing, which enhances the formal tone of the letter.

task achievement

The tone of the letter is polite and suitable for a formal request.

task achievement

The letter is clear and concise, effectively conveying your reason for cancellation and request for assistance.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

138 words

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You recently booked a part-time course at a college. You now need to cancel your booking. Write a letter to the college admministrator. In your letter. say which part-time course you booked explain why you need to cacel your booking ask about booking a different course

Word Count

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Many people believe that mobile phones cause more harms than the benefits and that’s why mobile phones should be restricted? To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Many children no longer read books and instead spend their time using modern technology. While some people think this is a positive trend, others think it is a problem. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.