Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Some would argue that
punishments
should be more suitable for each type of
crime
,
while
others say that
punishments
ought to be tough for any situation and attempt to commit a
crime
, and should be taken seriously.
This
essay aims to discuss both views and give my opinion. On the one side, some
punishments
are unfair and unsuitable for some
crimes
. In some countries
punishments
are extremely harsh, it is said that they should be fixed their sentences that would be suitable for each case. To illustrate, in Iran, there is a tough
punishment
for drug addiction which is sending them to prison for around 5 to 6 years. From my point of view,
this
punishment
does not help for these kinds of cases because drug addicts can gain access to drugs
while
in prison and will be still hooked upon release,
however
, l believe that the authorities should fix
this
problem and decide fair sentencing for each
crime
committed. On the other side,
crimes
committed should be taken seriously by punishing them for their behaviour in the same sentence
such
as sending them to jail.
This
method will be obvious to anyone who has the motivation to commit
crimes
and prevent them from doing it in the future because they know the consequences of doing something wrong.
For instance
, Switzerland has the lowest
crime
rate because citizens know the consequences of committing
crimes
due to
their laws extremely having tough
punishment
for any
crime
. In conclusion,
although
serious and obvious
punishments
might be helpful and reducing the number of
crimes
. I believe that
punishment
should be fair and accurate for each case because
this
is the best way to preserve people’s rights.
Submitted by ghazl.1998g on

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fixed punishments
  • consistency
  • predictability
  • deter crime
  • potential offenders
  • streamline
  • judicial process
  • bias
  • corruption
  • complexity
  • human behavior
  • circumstances
  • justice system
  • intent
  • remorse
  • socio-economic background
  • rehabilitate offenders
  • recidivism rates
  • flexible punishment systems
  • inconsistencies
  • perceived injustices
  • public trust
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