Your English-speaking friend has asked for your help with a college project helshe is doing about celebrating New Year in different countries. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter ◦ say how important New Year is to people in your country ◦ describe how New Year is celebrated in your country ◦ explain what you like about New Year celebrations in your country

My dearest, Khalid I hope
this
message finds you well. I am writing to assist you in your project about celebrating the New Year
event
. New Year is an extraordinary
event
because it happens once a year so we should give it's priority among anything. Celebrating
this
event
is traditional in my country and society as all families gather and share joyful moments with each other.
Also
, each part of
family
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the family
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member presents a small gift to the other person and wishes him the best of luck.
Finally
, we ate a gorgeous cake and drank beverages happily. That kind of
event
is peaceful and convenient because seeing every part of your family delighted and fit is an awesome feeling. I hope you enjoy your celebration. Thank you for your confidence and for contacting me, It's a pleasure to help someone like you. I hope I was beneficial. Stay safe. Your Faithfully, Naif Nazawi
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single idea per paragraph
Ensure that each paragraph focuses on one main idea for better clarity.
complete response
Expand more on why New Year is important to people in your country, perhaps by mentioning cultural or historical significance.
greeting and closing
The letter has a warm and appropriate greeting and closing, which adds a personal touch.
suitable writing tone
Your writing tone is warm and friendly, suitable for a letter to a friend.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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You are not ready for IELTS Speaking, if you

  • Can’t speak smoothly without pauses.
  • Use simple words and lack vocabulary.
  • Feel nervous and anxious when speaking.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Reflection
  • Goal setting
  • Traditions
  • Customs
  • Public celebrations
  • Fireworks displays
  • Unique local traditions
  • Communal
  • Familial
  • Prosperity
  • Festive atmosphere
  • Resolution
  • Good wishes
  • Exchanging gifts
  • Cultural and social differences
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