The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.
The
two
rendered maps, which depict in great detail, illustrate the comparison of arriving at a city hospital in Use synonyms
two
different years: 2007 and 2010.
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Overall
, it is clearly observable that, there was not anything roundabout on the access Linking Words
road
to the city hospital in 2007, Use synonyms
while
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two
squares were added to the hospital Use synonyms
road
in 2010.
To commence with, the bus station was located on both sides of the hospital Use synonyms
road
in 2007, Use synonyms
whereas
in 2010 the bus stop was located on the left side of the hospital Linking Words
road
. The car parking for staff and commons was located next to the bus stop in 2007, Use synonyms
whereas
in 2010 the car parking for ordinary people was located on the right side of the city hospital and Linking Words
this
is separated from the car parking staff.
On the flip side, in 2010, there were Linking Words
two
fields in the northern and southern parts of the hospital Use synonyms
road
, in case in 2007 there was not anything roundabout.Use synonyms
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